October 14,2006 请教！

今天我在网上找到几首新歌，都是英文的，而且节奏也很好。为了学会它们，我还保存了其中几首歌的歌词.不知道别的人是否也有同感，学习英文歌对发音是很有帮助的。Today I found severl new songs on-line.They all are English song, and the rhythm is very good. For learn to them,……I wonder if other person have the same feeling：Sing English song is good toPronunciation.

  刚才我的妹妹说我在QQ上是在线的，但我是隐身的，怎么会这样呢？Just moment,my young sister told me that I am“on-line”at QQ,but it should be“behind’’.How like this?

  我的是典型的中国式英语，所以上面想表述的意思是有错误的，还有省略的那部分都不知道怎么说。看到的朋友帮帮忙，替我修改和翻译一下，不胜感激！最好是整篇都翻译一遍。There are a lot of mistakes ,because that I said is Chinese style.I can’t express what I want to say.Please help me to translate and correct all of above,I can’t thank you enough!