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1）在“2005中国企业500强利润排序前100名企业”中名列第84位。金桥翻译Fq&qS)\

In 2005, XXX ranked No.84 among the top 500 enterprises in China in terms of profit gain.

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2）增资扩股，吸收新股东，办理了注册资本和股东变更登记手续。金桥翻译u5?3|(sl$C.S
Having added capital, expanded shares and absorbed new shareholders, we have already registered the capital again and modified the shareholders’ names.

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Expand the share 没什么意思金桥翻译-Q$[.["B4K%u

要说明到底是股票的一个什么“扩”法

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3）缩短中国钢铁与国际水平的差距为己任金桥翻译L&Yo6M[Db

We have been maintaining a commitment to narrowing down the chasm of steel quality between China and international advanced level.

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We are maintaining our commitment to improving the quality of steel made in China compared to that of steel on the international market. 

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We have maintained our commitment to narrowing down the gap between the quality of China's steel and that of the advanced international level."

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4）我国钢铁工业将在产能相对过剩的格局中进入战略性调整阶段.金桥翻译5b,K
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China’s iron & steel industry is entering into the phase of strategic adjustment to get out of the situation of superfluous output.

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